Ever wonder what the difference is between copy that compels you to buy and copy that compels you to leave a website?
Here are 5 tools you can use right now to write copy that compels your visitors to buy or at least stay on your website longer:
1. Use conversational copy. Talk to your readers. How do you talk? When you speak do you use contractions? Do you use colloquialisms? Write like you talk and you’ll make a better connection with your readers.
2. Use active words. Do you want to compel your readers to act or command them to act? Do you want your readers to benefit from your product or do you want it to change their life? Words have power. Find specific active verbs to paint your copy, to make it exciting and lively.
3. Make your copy benefit oriented. Honestly, your readers don’t care if your lawnmower has a push button start. What they care about is that the lawnmower starts easily. They don’t care if your lawnmower has a tight turning radius. They want to know that mowing around their rose bush is easy and doesn’t require a 30-point turn. Sell benefits not features.
4. Use common language. Make sure that you use words that people know. Absolutely do not, even if you’re writing for rocket scientists, use tech speach or jargon. Not only is jargon boring but also you’ll lose your audience if they don’t know what you’re talking about. Do use words that people are familiar with and can connect to.
5. Use emotions. We all want to feel smarter, richer, happier, thinner, more respected and so on. Use these emotions and emotional needs to connect with your reader. For example, “Do you feel paralyzed every time you have to go shopping? Do you hate trying on clothes? Does stepping in front of that three way mirror strike fear inside you?”
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These are all so true…especially the first one. I really like reading the blogs that feel like they are talking to me and just me. How intimate is that???
Absolutely. I think the best way to keep the attention of a reader is to make it simple, direct and benefit-oriented.
I recently discovered your blog (via google alerts) and love it! In fact, I recently listed it it in a post ” Our Women Bloggers List Grows” on one of my blogs Virtual Woman’s Day (http://www.virtualwomansday.com).
Wishing you all the best and continued success.
Heidi Richards, Founder & CE) – The WECAI Network™ – http://www.wecai.org
ps. I would love to interview you for one of our events – Blogging for Business – let me know if you would be interested!
Thanks, Heidi.
Sounds like a wonderful event you have planned. The power of blogging for your business is amazing. I would have started a ~loooong~ time ago if I had only realized how essential blogging can be for your business and the impact it has on your online business.